This semester we are using my Writing Illustrating and Publishing Kid's Books Handbook which also includes exercises the students didn't do because they are so passionate/obsessed about working on their own projects. I suggested they do them as party games with friends which would really be fun. They did however, read all the informative text (yay) and one student's young daughter drew all over the cover because she liked it so much (I felt honored). We are also using Writing Picture Books: A Hands on Guide
After we've discussed the readings and how they relate to where students are with their projects - it's critique time! The students bring enough copies of their stories for everyone to have one, and those that haven't been critiqued recently get critiqued. Because this is early in the course we are focusing on the stories, although one of the students is working on illustrations that I have assigned her to meet criteria that editors look for in portfolios, and another brought a story that was almost complete and we are bringing her illustrations up to a publishable level. I cannot describe how much fun this all is, or the intense concentration and focus required to almost psychically tune into how that particular author or illustrator can fix whatever needs fixing, tweaking, clarifying, or playing with. What is also amazing is how far the stories go from beginning to end and how wonderful it is to witness this and be a part of it.
For the critiques, we divide up the remaining time between the number of students needing critiques, and that's how much time they get. Someone reads the story out loud and we follow along and jot down notes. Then we read and proof the story and include suggestions before we discuss it as a group. I usually lead the discussion and everyone else jumps in to help solve issues or problems or with suggestions to make it stronger or funnier etc. The class is designed to be a gestalt and everyone is bonding beautifully.
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Eloquently written!
I tell my husband and friends that you are a great writing coach. You would tell us as it is.
In your quiet voice, you have gotten us to move out of our lazy, procrascinating or denial stages to create. Yes, we do have a fun group, and you are definitely, a great *coach* for beginner writers such as me. You make us move whether we like it or not.
Mira is full of knowledge because of her previous writing/art experiences. Thank you for sharing them with us. You are a *natural* teaching adults.
Yes, it is a fun group. Each writer/artist in the group brings in another dimension. We share our stories and our art. I enjoy how we give our imputs.
If we make it into the publishing world, it's because of you, Mira.
You empower us to fly, Coach Mira!
I love it, I love it!
Thank you ever so much!
PS. I wish you would host a class in Stockton. Halfway between Sac and Modesto.
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